Wednesday, December 14, 2011

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Thursday, December 8, 2011

Family tradition

Naveratri is an Indian tradition that is celebrated because they pray to god, have gatherings, and dance. The people wear nice clothing and dance to indian music. They even do Indian dances as well. After the dances are completely finished, we have Indian sweets. We have different kinds of Indian food to eat.

Monday, November 28, 2011

Intresting facts about myself

I play the violin for four years and I play very well. I am even good at playing basketball. I have two consorts every year and I play in front of 100 people every time I have a consort. I have to practice playing the violin and I have to practice playing basketball. My parents own three cars.

Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Holiday Traditions

My favorite holiday tradition is Diwali. I like to decorate my house with lots of lights. Also, we do colorful designs on the floor with colored powder. I even get to give Indian sweets to relatives and friends. In the evening, we get together and see the fireworks being lit up and burst in the sky.

Thursday, November 3, 2011

Personal Narrative

FCAs                                                                                Mira Patel 
1. Descriptive details                                                        November 4, 2011
2.  Flashback                                                                     English 6- 2
3.  Dialogue                                                                      Personal Narrative

                                            EXTREME NERF GAME

“Boom, Boom, Boom,” as I was shouting my Nerf gun at my friend and my 


younger brother. We were playing a game called “Deer and Hunter”. My


  brother and one of my friends were deer and another one of my friends


 and I were hunters. We would shoot the deer and try to hit the deer three


 times with our Nerf guns. If  we triumph, then they would be dead. It was


fun sneaking up at them and shooting them from the back. Yash and my


other friend Adan ran into the front yard of the house where they can have


 more places to hide and less of a chance of being shot  by the Nerf guns.


My friend and I started running after them. Hitting them the first time


 was really easy, but the rest of the game was getting harder. My brother


 and my other friend hid in a really good spot that my other friend and I


 didn't really expect where they were.   “Hey Mira come here,” said Arman


 my friend. You  go to the other side of the backyard and front yard and I


 will be on this side looking for them. We ran for ten minutes looking for


 them. Our feet tiptoed on the wet green grass as we were holding the Nerf


 gun in our hands ready to shoot them as soon as we saw them. We had to


be really quite so when we shoot them, my brother and my other friend      



don't run away.When Atman and I found them, we always chased them



 in the front yard and the back yard. We would always have to take a short



 break because we always used to become so breathless that we would



 collapse to the soft green grass and look at the blank white clouds and



the bright blue sky. Then once we got more energy in our body, we



 would continue our Deer and Hunter game. Then Arman went into



 the garage and searched there. He couldn't find them for the first few



 times in the garage, but when my other friend laughed behind the car,



Arman heard it. My brother was really mad because he ruined their



 best hiding spot, and there was only a small amount of really good



 hiding places. Also if they were hiding in the same place over and



over again, they would easily get found by Arman and I. “ MIRA



 COME HERE. I FOUND THEM IN THE GARAGE!” yelled Arman



 from across the yard “ MIRA, THEY ARE BEHIND OF THE HONDA



 CAR!” I came running to the garage and stared shooting them with our



 Nerf guns. We played it  again until the street lights came one, the moon



 came on, and our mothers voices called inside. We were always sliding in



 the grass and our pants and shirt got completely covered with grass stains



and dirt. We even had pieces of grass stuck to our face and hands. Our moms



would freak out when they see us get covered in grass stains and dirt all over



 our pants and shirts. My friends, my brother, and I all said bye to each other



 and went towards our house. “That was the greatest game I had ever played”,



 Yash said. My brother and I always head in laughingly back to our house



 holding the Nerf guns by our sides. We really enjoyed those moments of



playing Hunter and Deer with our friends. I wish that summer can stay



 forever and we can play this game over and over again.

Personal Narrative


FCAs                                                                                                           Mira Patel
1. Descriptive details                                                                                  November 4, 2011
2. Flashback                                                                                                English 6-2
3. Dialogue                                                                                                 Personal Narrative

                                                        EXTREME NERF GAME


“Boom, Boom, Boom,” as I was shouting my Nerf gun at my friend and my



younger brother. We were playing a game called “Deer and Hunter”. My brother and



one of my friends were deer and another one of my friends and I were hunters. We



would shoot the deer and try to hit the deer three times with our Nerf guns. If we



triumph, then they would be dead. It was fun sneaking up at them and shooting them



from the back. Yash and my other friend Adan ran into the front yard of the house where



they can have more places to hide and less of a chance of being shot by the Nerf guns.



My friend and I started running after them. Hitting them the first time was really



easy, but the rest of the game was getting harder. My brother and my other friend hid in



a really good spot that my other friend and I didn't really suspect where they were.



“Hey Mira come here,” said Arman my friend. You go to the other side of the



backyard and front yard and I will be on this side looking for them. We ran for ten



minutes looking for them. Our feet tiptoed on the wet green grass as we were holding



the Nerf gun in our hands ready to shoot them as soon as we saw them. We had to be



really quite so when we shoot them, my brother and my other friend don't run away.



When Atman and I found them, we always chased them in the front yard and the back



yard. We would always have to take a short break because we always used to become so



breathless that we would collapse to the soft green grass and look at the blank white



clouds and the bright blue sky. Then once we got more energy in our body, we would



continue our Deer and Hunter game. Then Arman went into the garage and searched



there. He couldn't find them for the first few times in the garage, but when my other



friend laughed behind the car, Arman heard it. My brother was really mad because he



ruined their best hiding spot, and there was only a small amount of really good hiding



places. Also if they were hiding in the same place over and over again, they would easily



get found by Arman and I.



“ MIRA COME HERE. I FOUND THEM IN THE GARAGE!” yelled Arman



from across the yard “ MIRA, THEY ARE BEHIND OF THE HONDA CAR!” I



came running to the garage and stared shooting them with our Nerf guns. We played it



again until the street lights came one, the moon came on, and our mothers voices called



inside. We were always sliding in the grass and our pants and shirt got completely



covered with grass stains and dirt. We even had pieces of grass stuck to our face and



hands. Our moms would freak out when they see us get covered in grass stains and



dirt all over our pants and shirts. My friends, my brother, and I all said bye to each other



and went towards our house.



“That was the greatest game I had ever played”, Yash said. My brother and I



always head in laughingly back to our house holding the Nerf guns by our sides. We



really enjoyed those moments of playing Hunter and Deer with our friends. I wish that



summer can stay forever and we can play this game over and over again.

Thursday, October 13, 2011

Patriot's Pen

“Are You Proud of Your Country?”


Are you proud of our country? Well, I am! The United States is a wonderful

democratic society that should always be protected. It should always be protected

so, that the citizen always have the ability to govern themselves. Soldiers have battled

endless wars to keep this country free; and wanting to keep the citizen safe they often

sacrificed their lives in war. Because of their bravery Americans continue to live in a

land where they can vote for their leaders and express their own views. As

John. F. Kennedy said, “My fellow Americans, ask not what your country can do for you,

but ask what you can do for your country.” To me that is what democracy is, in part,

about – a society working together for a common dream. Americans should all

understand, whether or not they are in the service, that it is up to all Americans to

preserve the values that make America the home of the free.

I value living in a society where even as a 11 year old, I can speak my own mind.

For example, I could design a petition suggesting a change in my neighborhood and

with enough signatures from fellow Americans, I could succeed in making changes.

And even if those changes don't happen, I'm proud of living in a society where peoples

voices are heard and respected. I know from research that Libya and Sudan don't have

democratic society. I wish all countries could have democracy and that they can all

choose their own leaders. In the future, I wish I could live in a world where there was

democracy for all peoples of all nations so that everyone could enjoy the rights I do

without fear of being punished or physically harmed.

In my school, I get to experience democracy, also, by having the opportunity to

participate in Student Council. Students get to model our government by having the

right to speak up and say what is on their minds, and represent the views of their

classmates. Student Council members, also get to participate in important social

activities that help members of our country such as helping Veterans by sending cards

and collecting necessary items for them. Student Council reminds the students of how 

they are a democracy and part of a greater democracy --- the United States of America.

I am proud to be part of this country where democracy is for everyone no matter what

a religion, age, or skin color is. Therefore it is for you and me, and it should

always be valued and protected.



















Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Halloween

I can't wait for Halloween night.I am going to decorate in front of my house some spooky stuff. My first choice to be on Halloween is becoming a pirate. For Trick-or-treat I am going around my community and the mall. I make sure that I get enough candy. For trick or treat I go with my friends,my brother and my mother. This Halloween I have a plan to go with a minimum of six friends and my brother for trick or treating.